First toon I've tried to do..
I'm too self-critical, I'd like to know what you guys think..
Does it look right for a toon?

 

not bad mate, but u have to twist it a bit more lol

 

Thanks for the feedback

 

Fuck it, this any better??

 

i'd make it more squat to the floor and we need to see wide tyre tread from the front tyres.

 

Think I've royally screwed it but here's the next chapter...

 

are you trying to do it like the koolart cars?

 

I surely am!

 

cool, ive never done one with a photo of a car i just draw/render them, but i tend to emphasize the key points on the car.

example, the RS has big beefy arches, the huge front grill and rear spoiler, make them stupidly big.
try copy/pasting parts them chopping bits around rather than skewing and smudging.

not slating by the way, just tips lol

 

Nice one.

 

cool

 

needs alittle more work

 

I like constructive criticism, knew I'd get it from PF

Just a little? lol