She looks very well, and it was high time she got cleaned. I can however see water marks on the paint, that's why the two bucket method is an important step. There is also alot of contamination so a paint clenser like AG intensive tar remover would have done a good job of that. It desolves tar spots.

I can understand the fustration of having a dark coloured car though and it's usually the same story again once back out on the road. If you used a good wax it would prevent you from having to do a lot of cleaning during the next washing though.